A similiar thread can be found here
(It is a bit outdated, as I have managed to get a more solid alphonce file by now, for anyone interested, see here.
I agree with spawns that opening with the moxy would be the wisest decision if you lack limier, it protects you against shades either way.
One thing I noted while playing my file is that you're pretty tight in SP if you go to equal levels of Refess/Lawtia with only the moxy, so I'd try to limit myself to refess 4- and Lawtia 2- units, for a generally nicer flow. That naturally means a more passive approach, as you are lacking the SP control or agressivity standalone lawtia units inherit.
As somewhat in the other thread mentioned refugee citizen is a bit more reliable as a grim baner, but might clog your graveyard, so your mileage may vary on this.
The problems with your file I see is a lack of quality and quantity. As gon said, it's slow building and you risk getting outswarmed with this filetype, and additionally you are a bit lacking in terms of damage, e.g. for bigs (The only way I can currently see you surviving is engaging and hoping that it ends well).
And for that matter, you don't need both safiria and annarose, you should pick one (depending on what you go for, cemetery retrieval or a more controlled engage), but not both.
One thing your mileage may vary on, is using a +2 SP as your first SS, as it can help you save your field at times, but it is strictly speaking not necessary. You can even try Priestess of Madness as your first, but it requires some timing.