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Re: Character Tree

Postby phailures » Mon Jan 02, 2012 2:01 am

Wow really nice work. It's really nice we can finally follow what's going on with the story xD

I wonder where Sumer/Fellana comes into play with dolls.
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Re: Character Tree

Postby SmallStar1 » Mon Jan 02, 2012 2:43 am

wow this really good clears everything up alot :)
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Re: Character Tree

Postby ingeniusg » Mon Jan 02, 2012 3:05 am

WHERE LUKE SHAVEWALKER and ANNAKIN SHEWALKS

AND OBI W.eKNOBI?

ANd CTeaPeeonU?

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Re: Character Tree

Postby Exeth » Mon Jan 02, 2012 9:24 am

Wow Shiro this is wonderful honestly, I thank you very much!! I am in awe :D
I am glad there are more villains to come, the dark lords... Really hoping they are villains.

Oh yeah you haven't included our most lovable beast king rivera in the tree as well.
Edit: Sorry I forgot you haven't included gowen yet hehe. Good luck!
Edit: You haven't included sumer.
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Re: Character Tree

Postby 2xDouble30 » Mon Jan 02, 2012 10:08 am

Wah, very nice. I particularly enjoy following the long lines. xD

By the way, Deathmaker is Mulna.

EDIT: Okay, just checked again. Deathmaker IS NOT Mulna. Looked similar though...
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Re: Character Tree

Postby CainHyde » Mon Jan 02, 2012 10:26 am

By usurps, does it mean Zugateroza "killed" by Durendal?
And I'm happy we will get another Judith.
When she join Dark Lords, did she do it voluntary?
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Re: Character Tree

Postby phailures » Mon Jan 02, 2012 11:38 am

CainHyde wrote:By usurps, does it mean Zugateroza "killed" by Durendal?
And I'm happy we will get another Judith.
When she join Dark Lords, did she do it voluntary?


Wait which of those is dark Judith?
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Re: Character Tree

Postby CainHyde » Mon Jan 02, 2012 12:04 pm

phailures wrote:
CainHyde wrote:By usurps, does it mean Zugateroza "killed" by Durendal?
And I'm happy we will get another Judith.
When she join Dark Lords, did she do it voluntary?


Wait which of those is dark Judith?

Oops... Sorry, I mean Yudit.
Too much seeing and using Judie lately, I mix their name somehow.
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Re: Character Tree

Postby Shirozaki » Mon Jan 02, 2012 4:35 pm

I did not forget Sumer, I did however ignore her for the time being, but since it has been mentioned, here's my reason:

Sumer is so much of a wild card that I had trouble placing her, she's obviously a former archmage of Regus who, along with Liz and Fellana, researched cause and effect. One day Fellana led her to the archive and what she saw made her what she is now. She distributed information from the Wiz Kingdom, which means she is effectively a criminal in regus,

She obviously supports annarose and the duchy, and lives there, she created the magic dolls, but she never USES them. She creates them, they are used in the war, but never by her. She also cares for Fellana and they become gate-guardians next set.
I'll probably add her to the duchy later, once I have established all the connections she has (Liz, Fellana, Extension...Yes, the crocodile).

CainHyde wrote:By usurps, does it mean Zugateroza "killed" by Durendal?
And I'm happy we will get another Judith.
When she join Dark Lords, did she do it voluntary?

He doesn't kill him, but stirs the undeads to a revolt, and creates the dark lords. He does so cleverly while Zug is after Elgandi. (This is what causes the storyline of Alteil 2, if I remember correctly)
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Re: Character Tree

Postby Romdeau » Mon Jan 02, 2012 6:32 pm

Some feedback, it would be nice if it were somehow easier to read and more intuitive organization wise. I'm not sure how you should accomplish this, but just something for you to chew on.

Maybe it would be better to break the tree into 2 parts (or more)? I'm trying to imagine Alteil's entire character set being related to each other on a single tree and it boggles me mind lol
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