Okay. Chapter 6 is finally here. this is probably the longest chapter yet. I'm trying to put my own spin on how some Iczer powers may work in this chapter.
PS: Some feedback would be much appreciated. Criticism is also appreciated, but please present it in a mature and respectful manner. I can't tell you how many times I get comments like "This sucks" or "This is gay" on other sites I post stories on. I'm not a professional writer or anything, but getting feedback really helps me develop my stories more.
After 5 days of travel, Two figures walk through a forest. The pair is of our hero, JillieFoo who is still blindfolded, and his new companion K, who is a decendant of the Belly dancer Kurina. They’re traveling in the direction the injured Firestorm Wyvern escaped to. They walk out into a clearing. Not far from the clearing was a gate blocking the way.
JillieFoo: huh? Why did we stop?
K: Deadend, there is a gate blocking the way Master.
JillieFoo: Well I’m sure if we call out to the people on the other side they will gladly unlock it.
K: I’m not so sure Master
K: They have surrounded us…. And they have weapons.
JillieFoo slowly takes off his blindfold so not to startled the people surrounding them. He looked around and saw that they wore outfits of monks.
JillieFoo: We don’t want any trouble. Were just looking for a Wyvern that flew this way
Monk1: Yeah, that Wyvern was here. It burned our crops! You should know that when the soar above, they burn everything to the ground!
Monk2: Did it come hear because of you!
JillieFoo: Umm… Uhh maybe?
One of the monks tries to grab JillieFoo’s arm, but K swiped his hand with her claw making him jump back.
Monk1: Gah! What are you!
K lowers her hood to reveal her ears.
K: You don’t touch the Master!
JillieFoo unsheathes his sword and activates Magic Weapon
JillieFoo: I don’t want to fight! Is there a way we can avoid the fighting?
Monk1: you’re an Iczer!?
The monks wisper among themselves until one walks toward them
Monk1: I think you’re the one we’ve been waiting for.
The monks took JillieFoo and K into their monestarie. They take JillieFoo anf K to their quarters.
Monk1: We’ll serve dinner soon. Well sound the bell when it’s ready
The monk soon leaves
JillieFoo: So are we prisoners?
K: I don’t think so, the doors unlocked.
JillieFoo: I guess they’ll tell us what they want when their ready.
2 hours go by. They here a bell ring.
JillieFoo: Guess it’s dinner time.
Shortly after that statement screams and shouting could be heard. The bell continued to ring and a roar can be heard.
K: Somethings wrong!
They quickly rush out seeing a guy ringing the bell. He was alerting everyone of the Wyvern that has comeback to the monestary.
JillieFoo: It’s back! Look, it’s eye is missing. That’s they Wyvern that attacked us!
K: I guess it’s going from place to place feeding on whoever it can find.
JillieFoo and K saw the Monestaries master lying on the ground blood spilling from him.
They run over to him. He reaches out to JillieFoo. JillieFoo grabs his hand. In his hand were prayer beads.
Master: T-take them… They will… They will allow you to use the power of our ancestors. The power of the Combat Monks… Use it to stop the Wyvern, A-and… Protect… My brothers…
His hand went limp and his head fell to the ground. JillieFoo’s hand tightened around the beads in rage.
K: Calm down. I’ll handle this. I’ve done it before.
JillieFoo: No… I’ll do it. I’LL USE THE POWER OF THE MONKS!!!
Another card shined from the deck and started to float in mid air. The picture had the picture of the combat monk. It shined bright and it’s light consumed JillieFoo. He raised into the air. The spectical drew attention by everyone including the Wyvern. When JillieFoo landed on the ground the light dispersed in a flash reavealing a figure in a cloak. The figure tosses the cloak off to reveal a person, about JillieFoo’s height. The person was wearing a strange blindfold over his eyes that covered most of his face except his nose and mouth. His hair was red and pulled back. He’s wearing the outfit of the monks, except he wears a vest that indicated he’s that of a combat monk.
???: Wyvern! You should keep in mind where you are and what you’re up against, because this is going to be one helluva fight.
K: Where is Master?
???: Sorry K, He is here, but he also isn’t here. I, Takumi 1st class Combat Monk, am conveying my power through his body.
K: Be careful Master!
Takumi: No problem!
Takumi leaps up and kicks the Wyvern in the head. the impact of the kick was enough to knock the Wyvern back from the monks and the remaining crops.
Takumi: I’m really pissed! The master of this Monestary was my son, once upon a time.
K: ? huh ? um… I thought monks aren’t allowed to um… DO that kind of stuff.
Takumi: … yes that is true, but even so, it’s hard to resist the urge when you meet someone who is your “one and only” someone…
K: So sweet! Forbidden love!
Takumi turned red and chuckled in embaressment.
Takumi: heh, yeah well…
The Wyvern slammed him to the ground
Takumi: GACK!!! Dammit! *Cough*
K, In anger through off her cloak revealing her dancers outfit, cat tail, and ears. She leaps onto the Wyvern’s are and digs her claws into it’s scales. It roars in pain as it whips her to the ground.
K: Ugh! M-master… I failed you!
Another card flies out of the deck and brings Takumi back to his feet.
Takumi: There good as new
Then another card falls out and revives K.
Takumi: Come one sweet heart. We’ll finish this together.
Takumi grabs K’s hand and pulls her close into his arms.
Takumi: Let’s rock baby!
K: Your quite the womanizer for a monk.
Takumi and K run with the hands together. As they get closer to the Wyvern it attempts to smash them, They leap apart and run up it’s arm. It try to swat them off, but Takumi leaps further up the arm, and K leaps onto the other arm. The run up to it’s shoulder and Takumi leaps and unleashes a huge kick to it’s head. K them leaps and slashes it across the face. The Wyvern staggers for a bit, but then it starts to fall backward. Takumi and K leap down before it hits the hits the ground.
Takumi: Whoo that was close!...
K: What’s wrong?
Takumi then looks over to his son laying on the ground. It struck him with great sadness. He walked over to his body and kneeled down into the puddle of blood surrounding the body.
Takumi: I’m sorry son… I died two years after your birth… I bet you became a monk to get closer to your father, but I never intended for this. You should’ve forgotten about me. Hell, I wasn’t supposed to be a father… I-I’m sorry son… I… I hope you had a good life.
A few tear rolled from his eyes as K put her hand on his shoulder.
K: Sorry, but… I need the Master back.
Takumi: Ah, yes. Sorry, I just never expected to see my son, especially dead.
Takumi stopped and light flashed and JillieFoo was back.
K: MASTER!!! YAY!!!
K ran over and licked him on the face
JillieFoo: BLEH! I tolds you not to do that!
K: Heh sorry! I’m just so happy! Master is getting stronger and stronger!
JillieFoo: yeah. I guess our journey west will give me the power to get Emily back.
Shortly afterward a small roar is heard, then that roar tunrs into a cry of pain. It’s the Wyvern. It’s not dead, but horribly wounded. Missing the one eye K goughed out, scratch marks all over its body and across its face. The picture of a truly pathetic creature.
JillieFoo: How sad…
Monk: SAD! It practically destroyed the monestary!
JillieFoo: It’s no greater or less then us! It was just trying to live. But it did harm quite a few people in the process.
JillieFoo puts his hand on the Wyvern and patted it.
JillieFoo: It’s okay… You’ll be okay.
The Wyvern closed it’s eyes.
JillieFoo: I wish this could’ve been avoided… Huh?
A card flies from the deck and covers the Wyvern in light. The picture changes from blank to the picture of the Wyvern. The Wyvern Stands up, it’s wounds healed, but the scars still visable. It roars and spreads it’s wings.
JillieFoo: Yes! Welcome to your new life! We’ll keep you company… Hey K?
K: Yes master?
JillieFoo: I think we’ve found our ride west… That is, do you mind us rideing you Wyvern?
The Wyvern lowers its head. JillieFoo and K climb up on to the Wyverns back.
JillieFoo: Monks, I have to leave, but I promise to bring help to rebuild the monestary when I find out a way to rescue my sister. Cya then!
The Wyvern starts to move its wings cause wind to blow fearicely. They lift off the ground and the Wyvern takes off at a high speed and JillieFoo once again continues west.
JILLIEFOO HAS OBTAINED NEW POWERS AND A NEW ALLY. JILLIEFOO IS FAST ON HIS WAY TO THE WEST TO FIND HIS DESTINY.
CHAPTER 7 COMING SOON!!!
"I'm weak, I've always been weak. But with these cards I'll grow stronger to protect those I love." -- Iczer JillieFoo