
monkeysmiles11 wrote:Hmm a bit tempted to to use my catira, toromea, and justice file to make a counter story to bring this evil to justice...
monkeysmiles11 wrote:Hmm a bit tempted to to use my catira, toromea, and justice file to make a counter story to bring this evil to justice...
Exeth wrote:Added to OP:
Hello.. welcome to our kingdom. Mind I ask what you are looking for here..?
My my... such a beautiful lady greeting us politely like this. I have to say I feel honored milady. (Although, at the same time I can feel such immense magical aura emanating from her)
Your answer..?
Arggh! Just cut the chit chat!!
(Haha... seems Dalos could also feel the energy emanating from this girl, his instinct took over. Perfect
I can see that your intentions aren't well at all.
Oh what makes you think that?
Well first of all, the scythe you've been pointing at me the whole time.
Oh? Xcelus? This thing is harmless hm hm hm...
Exeth!!! She's the one you've been looking for! Stop wasting time!!
Troops! We shall drive these people away at once!
All right!! Come to me puny humans!!
Be careful, I believe we mustn't underestimate these people.
Finally...
gadu wrote:Exeth wrote:Added to OP:
Maybe a typo: "Objection" should be "Objective." I'm not trying to be a smart arse; just thought Evil villains ought to emit an aura of excellence in their spelling and grammar, especially since this thread and story are so sweet. I expect you to get this published somewhere.
Exeth wrote:gadu wrote:Exeth wrote:Added to OP:
Maybe a typo: "Objection" should be "Objective." I'm not trying to be a smart arse; just thought Evil villains ought to emit an aura of excellence in their spelling and grammar, especially since this thread and story are so sweet. I expect you to get this published somewhere.
Thank you very much for your observation... error corrected.
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