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Re: Alterer's great battles

Postby gadu » Mon Jan 23, 2012 2:14 pm

Sweet, now you're writing dialogues; this just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for the next episode! :D
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Re: Alterer's great battles

Postby GonFreeces31 » Mon Jan 23, 2012 10:51 pm

This is the greatest thing to happen since SolarWind.
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Re: Alterer's great battles

Postby monkeysmiles11 » Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:58 am

Hmm a bit tempted to to use my catira, toromea, and justice file to make a counter story to bring this evil to justice...
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Re: Alterer's great battles

Postby Exeth » Tue Jan 24, 2012 2:34 am

Aww you guys! Thank you very much. I'm beginning to enjoy making these stories. But the replay slots cost 100 gran each :cry:
I want to continue and make the story much more entertaining though. We'll see how it goes... I've recycled 3 four stars already lol.
I appreciate all your comments..

monkeysmiles11 wrote:Hmm a bit tempted to to use my catira, toromea, and justice file to make a counter story to bring this evil to justice...


Actually for my next battle, I'm looking for Folrart's 3rd and 4th line of defense before I reach Aliria, maybe also a 5th. Catira, toromea and justice are just wanderers so they don't count as an official Folrart line of defense. And if you meant making your own good guys story, I would love it please do.
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Re: Alterer's great battles

Postby gadu » Tue Jan 24, 2012 11:18 pm

monkeysmiles11 wrote:Hmm a bit tempted to to use my catira, toromea, and justice file to make a counter story to bring this evil to justice...


I look forward to the final showdown, "Alterer vs. Monkeysmiles: Grudge of The Darkness" :twisted: (although, I think it would be more exciting if Monkey used his Lawt files...)
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Re: Alterer's great battles

Postby Exeth » Tue Jan 24, 2012 11:37 pm

Added to OP:
-Story Background
The origin
-Story Development
Story development will provide information upon current mission and core team members for said mission.
-Story Additions
Explaining 2 types of stories I will share.
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Re: Alterer's great battles

Postby gadu » Wed Jan 25, 2012 12:00 am

Exeth wrote:Added to OP:


Maybe a typo: "Objection" should be "Objective." I'm not trying to be a smart arse; just thought Evil villains ought to emit an aura of excellence in their spelling and grammar, especially since this thread and story are so sweet. I expect you to get this published somewhere. :D
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Re: Alterer's great battles

Postby Exeth » Wed Jan 25, 2012 1:01 am

~SS~

Prologue: How much magic a person able to generate? Well the girl in this next match seemed to have known no bound in terms of generating magic to its limit, if there is any! I was born a particularly curious person, so I was very determined to learn the answers for my own questions. It was a time when me and my team ventured to a kingdom known best for its destructive spells and wizardry that we came close to it. I knew this place would be my best bet to find the answer I was looking for. I was right! The answer wasn't too satisfactory but it was good enough for the time being... As we approached the castle main gate, the girl I've mentioned before stepped outside and greeted us with such favorable manner.
Image Hello.. welcome to our kingdom. Mind I ask what you are looking for here..?
Image My my... such a beautiful lady greeting us politely like this. I have to say I feel honored milady. (Although, at the same time I can feel such immense magical aura emanating from her)
Image Your answer..?
Image Arggh! Just cut the chit chat!!
Image (Haha... seems Dalos could also feel the energy emanating from this girl, his instinct took over. Perfect :twisted:)
Image I can see that your intentions aren't well at all.
Image Oh what makes you think that?
Image Well first of all, the scythe you've been pointing at me the whole time.
Image Oh? Xcelus? This thing is harmless hm hm hm...
Image Exeth!!! She's the one you've been looking for! Stop wasting time!!
Image Troops! We shall drive these people away at once!
Image All right!! Come to me puny humans!!
Image Be careful, I believe we mustn't underestimate these people.
Image Finally...
Image :twisted:

Enjoy:

Opponent: Wizard kingdom Princess and guards (Unlimited source of power... I like it!!)
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Re: Alterer's great battles

Postby Exeth » Wed Jan 25, 2012 1:03 am

gadu wrote:
Exeth wrote:Added to OP:


Maybe a typo: "Objection" should be "Objective." I'm not trying to be a smart arse; just thought Evil villains ought to emit an aura of excellence in their spelling and grammar, especially since this thread and story are so sweet. I expect you to get this published somewhere. :D


Thank you very much for your observation... error corrected.
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Re: Alterer's great battles

Postby wakka9ca » Wed Jan 25, 2012 11:36 am

Exeth wrote:
gadu wrote:
Exeth wrote:Added to OP:


Maybe a typo: "Objection" should be "Objective." I'm not trying to be a smart arse; just thought Evil villains ought to emit an aura of excellence in their spelling and grammar, especially since this thread and story are so sweet. I expect you to get this published somewhere. :D


Thank you very much for your observation... error corrected.


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